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Reading thus far, I'll be very frank with you, Jack. I find no reason at all to critique this story thus far. And I truly mean it - this was, and in my opinion is, a good comic which would really look good in a better setting. Truly. I liked the human in this overall structure, so much so that I had actually re-read the whole series - both Act 1 and 2. Which in my opinion, sums up my critique of this work - its good, the dialogue and environment and ambience. Well executed