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You and I
When we feel wrong,
We tumble down
We sing a song.

Every note
Goes through our ears
And plays out loud
Like no one hears.

It ricochets
And plays back through
Like waves of
Subtle déjà vu.

And every time
We hear it play
We hear how things went
Wrong that day.
I wrote this for the Live-Love-Write prompt: [link]
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HelixHartgrove Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
I find this poem sufficiently extravagent and great.
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MercytheRose Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful work, friend. I love the flow and the idea.
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