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I was surprised to see that you transitioned from script writing to straight up prose with this series. I must also say that this may b...

I'll be blunt: the relationship seems to be moving a bit fast here. I recently read the chapter that I assume was previous to this one,...

I'm here for the Critiquables. 1) The scene is interesting. The dialogue is very laid back coming from an evil leader, which seems odd,...

1. I've never been huge on exposition. I've always seen it as a necessary evil. It doesn't really add anything interesting, but then ag...


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This is Zumiex:
Zumiex draws a comic book, just like me!…
I liked his work so much, I bought a book!…
But seriously, he's a good friend of mine, you should check out his work, it's pretty awesome.

Second shout out goes to The Critiquables!…
I've been going to that group for a long while now. Here is there most recent unappreciated works feature!  Unappreciated Works Feature #25The feature for the month of February is up!
So, the works for this month are:



(There are more in the group, but for now, these are the ones which have had limited exposure thus far, and require comments I also understand that its below the standards of this group as well, but more submissions to this group would be helpful in remedying this problem. Those will be immediately added so as to give more fodder for commentary)
And well, the rules:
Now, the rules for submission are as follows:
* One critique allows you to submit one deviations, two critiques allows you to submit three deviations and three critiques or more allows you to submit five deviations for the whole month.
* You have to link/thumb the work which you have provided a critique on, to this journal.
* Number of deviations featured is based on how many critiques are given – they are equal to the number

Write one critique and you can submit something to be included in the next feature. Write three critiques and submit up to five writings, three of which will be included in the next feature! :D
It's a lot of fun and it's run by a good buddy of mine, Shehrozeameen

Thank you for reading,



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Little-Red-Hat Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the favourite and your ongoing critiques. I often worry about my writing being awful, so I appreciate feedback and support!
jackgunski Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2015
I wouldn't have favorited it if I didn't think it was particularly good. Believe me: in 5 years I've had less than 100 favorites. XD
seaboundstars Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015
Thank you for the favorite.
Manouilidis Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014   General Artist
Hey there how are things ???
Wanted to stop by and wish you merry Christmas :)
jackgunski Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014
Hey there, I'm doing really well, thank you.
And a merry Christmas to you too! :D
Manouilidis Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015   General Artist
Happy New Year my dear :)
jackgunski Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015
:) And to you as well.
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Jack, you submitted the following to the group :iconpoetrynprosewatchers:…

I had to decline. We don't accept such submissions for the group. Read the following journal for details on how to submit:


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